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Edi’s Stinky Trainers Came to live

热度 6已有 1030 次阅读 2011-5-20 10:13 |关键词:teacher always school

     Edi Arable, is a boy that can made everybody cause a headache. He is VERY naughty and disagreeable. He has transfer to another school for seven times, and now he is studying in his eighth school. He always escape school when teacher is having a class, and to play in the mud and sometimes, he’ll even to climb to trees. Edi, as I say, is the most naughty boy you’ve ever seen.

    Edi has a pair of STINKY trainer. They’re very smelly and disgusting. Because Edi always stamp on the mud without notice them, and he never wash them. They are so very stinky. But however, we have to get on.

     Well, one day, Edi has escape school again. When he was running to the yard, he stamp on some dog’s droppings without notice it! ( And even this crazy boy notice it, I dare say, he will not stop)

    At that night, when Edi is sleeping in his hubbub bed. His stinky trainers came to live. You can actually hear the right shoe say to the other: “You see, that nauseating boy has make stinky again.”

The left shoe sign: “Yep! But how can we help it? Oh, how I want to take a bath.”

The right shoe cry: “Ha! You wan to clean yourself? Me too! Let’s go to the pood.”

“Can…..can WE?” The left shoe ask, quivering.

The right shoe say: “Oh, come on boy, no one will see us. Every body is sleeping now.”

It is true. So two of them climb very slow and quiet to the pond and have a nice bath. And ten minutes later they’re clean again.

The next morning, when Edi wakes up and ready to put on his trainers, he was surprised to find that his trainers are as clean as Mum’s shoes.

“Wow,” Edi thinks, “How can they be able to clean themselves? This is queer.”

        Edi decide to find out the answer. So that night, he go to bed at ten o’clock and pretend to be very tired and doze off. In the mid-night, Edi can hear a sound. He open his eyes just a tiny bite. Out of the corner of his eyes, he caught a sight of his two trainer, moving slow and quiet to the window, and then---Edi didn’t believe his eyes----two of them both jump out of the window and get into the garden. They move quickly to pond and jump in.

Edi is dumbfounded.

He follow the shoes to the pond.(His bedroom was on one floor) And there he stay crying: “Stop! What are you going?” 

The trainer look at him and scream with laugher, “Hi! You nut! You make us too dirty! We will find another master!”

Edi fill sorry. “ Please come back! I will never make you dirty again!”

And suddenly, the trainers become quiet. They don’t move, they don’t talk.  They’re ordinary shoes again.

Edi pick them up and say ,“I will never make you dirty again!”


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回复 fcb 2011-5-23 14:21
姐姐,写得很棒啊!记着单数第三人称动词要变化,我也经常忘记。
回复 fcb 2011-5-24 05:02
Well, my teacher told me, when we are writting a story, it's better to use past tense.
回复 小白杨 2011-5-24 09:30
我代汤圆姐姐谢谢弟弟了,常来逛逛哦。
回复 little_duckling 2011-5-28 19:44
我很喜欢你的故事。
回复 little_duckling 2011-6-1 06:38
我的学校也有一个很调皮的男生。

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