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GH. 发表于 2011-6-30 22:15 |发短消息 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览 |打印
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                                                   Graduation Speech

Dear Madam Wu, teachers, students of graduating classes, parents and all distinguished guests,

I am greatly honored to speak here on behalf of the graduates of 2011.

5 years ago, when I first stepped into Q. F. L., mom and dad took my hands and handed me over to my first class teacher. At that time, I had absolutely no idea what was going to unfold in front of me. All I was thinking about was “Wow, I will have a lot of new friends to play with”. Yes, I did make a lot of new friends at Q.F. L. and together we had 5 wonderful years. But the past 5 years in Q.F.L. has given me much more than that. I believe the same applies to every graduate here. For this, I would like to express our gratitude to all those who made it happen.

Countless thanks to Madam Wu. To us, you are a strict mentor as well as a loving grandmother. We love the stories you shared with us from time to time. From you we have learnt to be self-disciplined, grateful for all we have and responsible for ourselves and others. Your teaching has been deeply engraved in our mind and we will benefit from it for a lifetime.

Many many thanks to our teachers. Your hard work and patience has turned us from ignorant kindergarteners into intelligent teenagers. We are now ready to continue our exploration for knowledge, thanks to the solid foundation that you help us establish. And by the way, we’d also like to apologize for all our mischief that gave you so many headaches.

And we shall not forget to thank those who have given us the gift of life, who make sure that we are healthy and safe, who provide us with all we need, who accept us as what we are and love us unconditionally -our beloved parents.

Ah, yes. A lot of thanks to our classmates too. During the past 5 years, we had so many laughters and tears together. We celebrated together for the achievement of the class. We helped and consoled each other in face of frustration. You have made the past five years a sweet and unforgettable memory of mine. I am very lucky to be your classmate.

Having extended so many thanks, the only thing that remains to be said now is

CONGRATULATIONS, all graduates of 2011!!!! We have finally made it! Good luck to you all! Have a nice journey with all what you have gained from Q.F.L.! May Q.F.L. be proud of us all the time! Last but not least, may our dear Q.F.L. have a more prosperous future!



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fxychen 发表于 2011-6-30 23:22 |发短消息 |只看该作者
小学毕业, 能写到这个水平, QFL还真不错。
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真真 发表于 2011-6-30 23:34 |发短消息 |只看该作者
回复 #1 GH. 的帖子

感动、佩服、让女儿以学长为榜样。

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真真  @babysmile 每个孩子身上都会有闪光点,有幸能做同学、校友,希望大家互帮互学,取长补短,共同进步。能在一起是一种缘份,希望小朋友们早日相见。  发表于 2011-7-1 23:53  回复  
babysmile  你女儿也是我们学习的榜样!  发表于 2011-7-1 11:41  回复  
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GH. 发表于 2011-7-1 00:02 |发短消息 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 GH. 于 2011-7-1 13:02 编辑

回复 #2 fxychen 的帖子

呵呵, 应该也是孩子以后学习上的目标,这仅仅是一篇给学校的感谢词。要求能理解,发音正确清晰,能带感情即可。 也多请指教。
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babysmile 发表于 2011-7-1 11:41 |发短消息 |只看该作者
GH. 发表于 2011-7-1 00:02
回复 #2 fxychen 的帖子

呵呵, 应该也是孩子以后学习上的目标,这仅仅是一篇给大家的感谢词。要求能理解,发音正确清晰,能带感情即可。 也多请指教。

相信口音也很纯正的!
拜读了!
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tanny 发表于 2011-7-1 12:07 |发短消息 |只看该作者
我觉得孩子能很标准的朗读完就很好了,如果是孩子自己写的,我真要敬仰了。
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fxychen 发表于 2011-7-1 15:00 |发短消息 |只看该作者
GH. 发表于 2011-7-1 00:02
回复 #2 fxychen 的帖子

呵呵, 应该也是孩子以后学习上的目标,这仅仅是一篇给学校的感谢词。要求能理解,发音正确清晰,能带感情即可。 也多请指教。

小学五年级,阅读理解到这个水平,应该也算不错了。我儿子5年后毕业要能读完理解,我也满意了。可怜我学了那么多年英语,过了CET6, 也不是每个字都认识的。

要真的是小学生一字一句自己写出来,那不算个天才了,至少大半个了。就算英美的学生,词汇语法没问题,这样的作文结构和逻辑也超过11岁孩子的普遍能力了吧。
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lukeyu 发表于 2011-7-1 15:19 |发短消息 |只看该作者
perfect!
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GH. 发表于 2011-7-1 17:50 |发短消息 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 GH. 于 2011-7-1 17:51 编辑

回复 #7 fxychen 的帖子

你讲得有道理的。孩子能将英语翻到中文并理解的句意。那晚,我通篇一句句问,也怕他背诵而不解其意。希望孩子理解它,能去真正地感恩周围关心他们成长的所有人。这次是大声全篇背诵通过,而且要求带些情感(但是中间还是有次停顿,遗憾点)。其实对那二位孩子还是有要求的,那女孩背诵很有感情并连贯。其实我更关注是感谢的内容本身,就担心人家没有写到位而遗漏内容。
另外,你看看是不是写的有点中式化了?我没有水平评判。 呵呵
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GH. 发表于 2011-7-1 17:50 |发短消息 |只看该作者
回复 #8 lukeyu 的帖子

谢谢! 因为我不懂。
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fxychen 发表于 2011-7-6 16:41 |发短消息 |只看该作者
回复 #9 GH. 的帖子

是有点中式的感觉。老美的致辞通常会在幽默搞笑一点。
分享一个大学版的:http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjQzMTI0NjA=.html
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