2011年上海高考英语整体听力点评及写作详评（昂立中高考）

2011年上海高考英语听力整体点评(昂立外语中高考项目部）

听力难度系数有限，语音标准，语速就08年（极端快速，130-140每分钟），回归至110字/每分钟。听力考试场景化，生活化，贴近学生实际，短对话中，考察到了机场，服务费，快递等，长对话考察到了抱怨海鲜食物和记忆力问题。 段落文章，考察到了哈佛大学的问题，细节偏多，但很有逻辑顺序。如果适当作笔记，得分应该不成问题。

2011年上海高考英语写作详评（昂力外语中高考项目部）

2011年上海高考英语卷考察是写一份申请扶贫项目的申请信，翻阅往年高考上海英语试卷，在2005年春季高考中也考察到申请信，但事隔6年，难度系数也陡然上升。

下文为05年春季的作文题目以及本人撰写的2篇原创范文以及11年上海高考作文及本人撰写的2篇范文均已出炉，

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05 年 上 海 高 考 英 语 作 文

Directions: write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生（exchange student）征询为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由（包括所具备的条件）。

Sample Essays

Essay One

Dear Mr. / Ms,

I have heard that our school is seeking for some home stays for exchange students who came from Canada. I guess my family meets the requirements and I would love to apply for it.

My house is close to the Central Business District. From my house, one can enjoy a good bird view of our city, as it is on the 42nd floor. What’s more, I will arrange sightseeing for the exchange students to have a deep impression of our cultural deposits and great development.

My father works in a foreign-owned enterprise and my mother is an English teacher. In view of this, our family will have no trouble communicating with them. Besides, we even have a guest room in our house, which allows the exchange student to have his or her own space.

In conclusion, I definitely have the confidence of being a wonderful host to the exchange students. It is a great honor if I get this chance to show them the culture and modernization of our city and to leave them a deep impression of hospitality.

Yours,

Li Hong

Essay Two

Dear Headmaster,

I am writing to you in the hope of attaining the opportunity of accommodating exchange students from Canada. I think my family can provide them with
decent conditions and my reasons are as follows.

Firstly, my family lives in the downtown of Shanghai. Therefore, we have easy access to all kinds of transportations, such as subway, bus, and plane, thereby greatly facilitate the exchange students’ traveling.

Secondly, my parents are local Shanghai residents, indicating that they can afford advantageous advices for foreign students on where to go and what to do during their fortnight-stay, thus enabling them to make full use of their sojourn.

Last but not least, my family is living in a large detached house, so we have sufficient vacant rooms for them, which I believe is most desired for tired travelers who’ve gone all the way from Canada to China.

Therefore, I am confident to provide the exchange students with comfortable living conditions. And I would really appreciate if you could give me the chance. Thank you for reading my application.

Yours,

Li Hong

     11 年 上 海 高 考 英 语 作 文

若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。

启示： 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。

信中请包括：

1．  你个人基本情况 2．  你对申请项目具体设想 3．  项目经费使用情况

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SsSample  Answer one

Dear Sirs,

Hello! I’m Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas.

My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly, we will set out for  primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program.

As to how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.

I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

  亮点词组句型归纳:

1.   be interested in 对…感兴趣

2.   write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期（实现某愿望）

3.   carry out 履行

4.   poverty-stricken 贫困的

5.   poverty-relief 扶贫的

6.   given  考虑到

7.   be on the look-out for 寻找

8.   meet more demands 满足更多的需求

9.   recruit 招募

10. qualified 有资格的

11. set out for 出发前往

12. in advance 提前

13. allocate 分配

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     Sample Answer two

Dear Sirs,

         My name is Li Ming and I’m a student from Mingqi High School. As I have grown up in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group has always been my dream. I’m writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund that I have heard about recently.

In fact, there are still a large number of school-age children who have no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country. So, I sincerely hope that I can do something to make a difference by making full use of your program. If I can get the supporting money, first, I will use some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need. Since the fund is limited, I will try to buy some second-hand reading materials for their free-time reading. Besides, I have to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the postal charges.

Last but not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund to start the poverty-relief program in our country and I will try my best to use the fund. I’m looking forward to your reply!

                                                                                                                                                                                                         

1. lend a hand to 帮助…

2. apply for 申请

3. the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目

4. school-age children 学龄儿童

5. have no access to good education接受不到良好的教育

6. undeveloped region 欠发达地区

7. make a difference  有影响

8. make use of 利用

9. a small sum of money 一小笔钱

10. postal charge  邮费

2011年上海高考英语作文申请信件一些经典句式(昂立外语中高考项目部）
本次2011年高考上海英语卷作文体裁是写一封申请信，这里给大家补充一些写申请信常用的句式

开头常用句式

　　Your advertisement made me unable to wait to write this application for the post because I think I have the qualifications you are seeking.

　　I am writing to apply for the advertised post of …

　　I would like to apply for admission to your college.

　　I would like to further my studies in … department of your honored university.

　　I would like to apply for the graduate program of … in your university.

　　I would like to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries.

　　I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in … towards a master’s degree in your university.

　　I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school of ..

结尾常用句式

　　Looking forward to your favorable reply.

　　I hope you will kindly send me an application form.

　　Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

　　I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.

　　I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and could send me some information about the scholarship.

　　Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to your reply.

　　I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about the result of my application.

　　If any scholarships are available, I would appreciate it if you would send me the necessary application forms.

　　I hope my academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

其他常用句式

　　I have obtained my BA in … from University.

　　I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summer from … University.

　　I major in … and did some research work during my undergraduate years.

　　Since graduation I have been working in … which specializes in…

　　Now I am particularly interested in…

　　Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about …

　　I hope to further continue my research on …

　　Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript.

　　I am interested in your MA programs in …, and wish to enter this program. My background is as follows: …

求职申请信常用句型

　　1. In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.

　　2. With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.

　　3. Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.

　　4. Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.

　　5. In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.

　　6. Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me. I feel I can fill that position.

　　7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next summer？

　　8.I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company

　　9.I have been in the business for the last ~ years,and worked as the director of the…department.

　　10. I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.

　　11. For the last ~ years,I have been and still am a / an ~.

　　12. I'm ~ years of age,female / male,and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office

　　13. I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.

　　14. If you desire an interview,I shall be most happy to call in person,on any day and at any time you may appoint.

　　15. Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.

　　16. I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.

　　17. Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.

2011年上海高考英语写作中关于联合国基金会组织背景（昂立外语中高考项目部）

联合国儿童基金会（United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund, 简称UNICEF），原名联合国国际儿童紧急救助基金会，于1946年12月11日创建，其目的是满足战后欧洲与中国儿童的紧急需求。1950年起，它的工作扩展到满足全球所有发展中国家儿童和母亲的长期需求。1953年，UNICEF成为联合国系统的永久成员，隶属联合国系统，受联合国大会的委托，致力于实现全球各国儿童的生存、发展、受保护和参与的权利。

United Nations Children's Fund was created by the United Nations General Assembly on December 11, 1946, to provide emergency food and healthcare to children in countries that had been devastated by World War II. In 1953, UNICEF became a permanent part of the United Nations System and its name was shortened from the original United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund but it has continued to be known by the popular acronym based on this old name. Headquartered in New York City, UNICEF provides long-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to children and mothers in developing countries. It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Group and its Executive Committee.

UNICEF relies on contributions from governments and private donors and UNICEF's total income for 2006 was $2,781,000,000. Governments contribute two thirds of the organization's resources; private groups and some 6 million individuals contribute the rest through the National Committees. UNICEF's programs emphasize developing community-level services to promote the health and well-being of children. UNICEF was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturias Award of Concord in 2006.